Wednesday, December 5, 2007

Gustul ploii/ Rain taste

Zile de toamnă
sub cerul înnegurat;
doar gustul ploii
a mai rămas pe buze
iar pe frunze stropi amari


Autumn days
under the misty sky;
the taste of rain
left on my lips and
bitter drops on the leaves

6 comments:

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

this is beautiful! and 3 years ago!! maybe you will feel like going back to it some day?

Magdalena Dale said...

Please excuse my delay...
Thank you!
Tanka is my first "love" and I can't forget it :)

Princess Haiku said...

This is wonderful Magdalena, hope you update your blog soon.
Diane

Eddie said...

Beautiful tanka. I like Autumn and rain :-)

Magdalena Dale said...
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Magdalena Dale said...

Thank you, Diane. I'll try...

Eddie, thank you. I like rain and autumn too:)